tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post4034921978695072484..comments2023-06-24T11:28:19.367+01:00Comments on Monkeying around: Forgiveness (inspired by Poets United)Flying Monkeyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12835912122094846809noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-8696207216764691362010-12-10T22:36:52.903+00:002010-12-10T22:36:52.903+00:00"Given respect
To the fact
That we all make m..."Given respect<br />To the fact<br />That we all make mistakes<br />And the past has long gone"<br />I wish I could make this my truth.Evelynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03773200135330787188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-51308467537386396092010-12-10T17:03:06.323+00:002010-12-10T17:03:06.323+00:00you have such beautiful wonders.
you will be forgi...you have such beautiful wonders.<br />you will be forgiven with your unbeatable humor.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-6433694400723223742010-12-10T14:44:00.784+00:002010-12-10T14:44:00.784+00:00Thanks. So do I Nino ;-)
I'm trying hard to st...Thanks. So do I Nino ;-)<br />I'm trying hard to stop being that fool :-)Flying Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12835912122094846809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-22975654976219311912010-12-10T10:33:52.198+00:002010-12-10T10:33:52.198+00:00Dear Dani,
Wow! I love the blue expanse that is yo...Dear Dani,<br />Wow! I love the blue expanse that is your backdrop to your blog.<br /><br />Your poem drips regret - poor fool in the song. I see him sometimes when I look in the mirror!<br /><br />Hugsninotazizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06491437553562159354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-8011495607988366262010-12-10T08:57:13.524+00:002010-12-10T08:57:13.524+00:00Thank you all for stopping by and commenting. Here...Thank you all for stopping by and commenting. Here's the link to the song:<br />http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IaYrMR5vBnc<br />I've changed the words around a bit.Flying Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12835912122094846809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-87202998841020895192010-12-10T05:44:01.267+00:002010-12-10T05:44:01.267+00:00Nice take on the prompt..
I like these lines
"...Nice take on the prompt..<br />I like these lines<br />"The last words of a fool<br />Melodiously said<br />Could have<br />Would have<br />Should have "Rashmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05294504967496661652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-29950735699806604642010-12-10T03:08:11.913+00:002010-12-10T03:08:11.913+00:00Well written poem. I especially like the last two ...Well written poem. I especially like the last two lines! Well done.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-6111815757830008982010-12-10T01:31:17.960+00:002010-12-10T01:31:17.960+00:00Nice flow to this Dani.
PamelaNice flow to this Dani.<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-71279074313605650732010-12-10T01:30:30.386+00:002010-12-10T01:30:30.386+00:00Your poem is filled with meaning. Could have, sho...Your poem is filled with meaning. Could have, should have, would have... I agree with 'words4afridnd' that we all have probably been that fool at one time or another! Hopefuly we learn!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-81713633389849574612010-12-10T00:49:57.528+00:002010-12-10T00:49:57.528+00:00I think we all have been that fool in the song at ...I think we all have been that fool in the song at one time, nice writeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-42842463007013397842010-12-09T21:46:32.328+00:002010-12-09T21:46:32.328+00:00Should have tried not to be the fool in the song.....Should have tried not to be the fool in the song..great line, nice poemKodjo Deynoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-85740962082542279292010-12-09T18:21:44.664+00:002010-12-09T18:21:44.664+00:00Flying Monkey,
Very nice words which could apply t...Flying Monkey,<br />Very nice words which could apply to so many circumstances.<br />It's simply the choice we make at a particular time. In the mood for forgiveness....or not.<br /><br />Eileen<br />Nice to have met you via Poets United.<br />I have added your Blog!Eileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-61583281699167575932010-12-09T17:37:49.967+00:002010-12-09T17:37:49.967+00:00Cheers Eric. That's probably because we all ar...Cheers Eric. That's probably because we all are fools quite a lot of the time and because it's nicer that saying "idiot" ;-)Flying Monkeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12835912122094846809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7557340011447057537.post-70214737727301799202010-12-09T17:31:35.512+00:002010-12-09T17:31:35.512+00:00Nice take on forgiveness, Dani.
"Fool" ...Nice take on forgiveness, Dani.<br /><br />"Fool" is often used in songs, like "What A Fool Believes" or "Fool In The Rain" or "Why Do Fools Fall In Love?"Bubbahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927345716112968689noreply@blogger.com