Tuesday, 19 April 2011

Life's dream

I dreamt a dream! What can it mean?
All the places where I have been
All the things that I have seen
Where are they now? They seemed so real!

I’m sure I was awake and not asleep.
Everything was felt so deep.
I fought and struggled, I tried so hard
When there was nothing to fight
And nothing to guard
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous19 April 2011 at 22:43

    ah the dream world, a enchanted place indeed :)

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  2. Amanda Moore20 April 2011 at 04:38

    Ooooo love that ending nothing to guard? Awesome!

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  3. Anonymous20 April 2011 at 05:35

    I also like the direction of the your take on the prompt - and the ending

    "When there was nothing to fight
    And nothing to guard "

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall24 April 2011 at 20:05

    superb.
    glad to see you posting.

    join jingle poetry tonight.

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