Maybe sometimes
When life comes crushing in
Flooding your shores
And overcoming your defence
It’s time to give up the struggle
And rather than drowning
In feelings of defeat
Resurface smiling
Because by finally
Being brought to your knees
And having lost all control
You are blessed with the opportunity
To experience real freedom
And the taste
Of sweet surrender
sometimes we muct lose it all to know what we have ahead....beautiful write my friend .
ReplyDeleteThat's what I'm talkin bout! Excellent take and well done!
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful advice. Beautifully done =)
ReplyDeletesweet indeed.
ReplyDeleteso very cool expression.
Surrender is indeed the only true freedom - well written!
ReplyDeleteBeing brought to your knees
ReplyDeleteAnd having lost all control
You are blessed with the opportunity
To experience real freedom
And the taste
Of sweet surrender...
...indeed...felt.
A great write on a great way to live!
ReplyDeletelovely thoughts.
ReplyDeleteInvite you to write for week 5 challenge,
Hope all is well.
Thanks for the attention.
Appreciate your input.
Cheers.