Friday 24 June 2011

Sweet surrender

Maybe sometimes
When life comes crushing in
Flooding your shores
And overcoming your defence
It’s time to give up the struggle

And rather than drowning
In feelings of defeat
Resurface smiling

Because by finally
Being brought to your knees
And having lost all control
You are blessed with the opportunity
To experience real freedom
And the taste
Of sweet surrender

8 comments:

  1. sometimes we muct lose it all to know what we have ahead....beautiful write my friend .

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  2. That's what I'm talkin bout! Excellent take and well done!

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  3. This is wonderful advice. Beautifully done =)

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  4. sweet indeed.
    so very cool expression.

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  5. Surrender is indeed the only true freedom - well written!

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  6. Being brought to your knees
    And having lost all control
    You are blessed with the opportunity
    To experience real freedom
    And the taste
    Of sweet surrender
    ...

    ...indeed...felt.

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  7. A great write on a great way to live!

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  8. lovely thoughts.


    Invite you to write for week 5 challenge,
    Hope all is well.
    Thanks for the attention.
    Appreciate your input.
    Cheers.

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