Saturday 18 June 2011

Threshold (for Writer's Island)

Standing
Looking
Bending forward a bit
Trying to sneak a peek around the corner
Hesitating
One foot in the air
Hang on
No
Shall I?
Shall I not?

Don’t try to step across it
Fly across it!
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 June 2011 at 22:38

    fly across it.....brilliant :)

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  2. gsb319 June 2011 at 01:58

    Got my attention from the start. Nice ending, a good surprise!

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  3. Anonymous19 June 2011 at 02:25

    You've captured the threshold feeling! Fly!

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