Like drawings on water
Thoughts come and disappear
Never changing its essence
The water’s always clear
But I choose to retrace them
Again and again
By analysing and dwelling
Never putting down the pen
Until these drawings
Become all I can see
And the water blurs into
A distant memory
Oh, I like this. Drawing on the water, so ephemeral. Best to capture it in a poem.
ReplyDeleteWoW! Wonderful imagery.
ReplyDeleteI like your opening lines , lovely transient thoughts brought to book at last!!
ReplyDeleteI can see the dynamic images in your words.
ReplyDeletewell done.
Greetings,
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