Thursday, 14 June 2012

Opportunity (for Poets United)


I'd rather regret having done it
Than not having tried at all

Missed opportunities
And lost chances
Always beg to know
What if

While
Failed trials
And lessons learnt
Only suggest
How to do it better


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5 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue Sky15 June 2012 at 00:52

    Oh I so love this! The last stanza just nails it. Well done!

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  2. Rinkly Rimes16 June 2012 at 08:53

    That goes against all the advice but it makes sense. How often we look back on a USED opportunity and wish it had stayed dormant!

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  3. Anonymous16 June 2012 at 20:37

    Very clean, very sure, very nice!
    One thing...the 'I' at the beginning...should it read 'I'd...'?

    Great pace too!

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  4. Hannah16 June 2012 at 23:12

    I agree with you...and I appreciate your forth rightness!! Smiles to you!

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  5. Flying Monkey24 August 2012 at 12:07

    Thanks for all your feedback. Your suggestion has been adopted, Kolembo :-)

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