Thursday 14 June 2012

Opportunity (for Poets United)


I'd rather regret having done it
Than not having tried at all

Missed opportunities
And lost chances
Always beg to know
What if

While
Failed trials
And lessons learnt
Only suggest
How to do it better


5 comments:

  1. Oh I so love this! The last stanza just nails it. Well done!

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  2. That goes against all the advice but it makes sense. How often we look back on a USED opportunity and wish it had stayed dormant!

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  3. Very clean, very sure, very nice!
    One thing...the 'I' at the beginning...should it read 'I'd...'?

    Great pace too!

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  4. I agree with you...and I appreciate your forth rightness!! Smiles to you!

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  5. Thanks for all your feedback. Your suggestion has been adopted, Kolembo :-)

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