Saturday, 9 October 2010

From my heart to my mind (inspired by Carry on Tuesday)

Close your eyes, have no fear
I’m with you my dear
I’m the voice of the heart
And the truth that you hear

Beware of the doubters
They’re always near
They’re trying to stop you
They whisper in your ear
They make everything cloudy
That seemed to be clear

It’s only you and me
Who decide in here


  1. Your heart speaking to your mind! What a clever idea!

  2. Oooh! Those last three lines are fabulous. I could have them tattooed across my heart.

  3. The heart and the mind are a dynamic duo! Very creative dramatic monologue!

  4. Mind over matter........we dont mind and you dont matter.

    Love the ideas here

  5. Thank you for your comments, guys. I didn't know where this prompt was leading me until I finished. That's what I love about writing in response to a prompt. I never quite know what will come out of it. Glad, you enjoyed the outcome of this one.

  6. Ha, I didn't see the title and thought Rinkly Rimes was really really clever! Turns out it was me who wasn't... Loved the poem, it's certainly something we should remember! :)