Saturday, 2 October 2010

SOAR (Inspired by Writer's Island)

There are days
When life seems such a bore
And little things
Get right to my core
Then I dream myself away
To a beautiful shore
Or into the wild
where the lions roar
And I find myself wanting
So much more
I don't want to fly
I want to soar!
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8 comments:

  1. Diane T2 October 2010 at 19:50

    My fav lines are the last two:

    I don't want to fly
    I want to soar!

    Very well written - beautiful images!

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  2. Deborah2 October 2010 at 20:58

    I think we all can identify with this, well written!

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  3. Mary2 October 2010 at 22:49

    This is a lovely poem..heartfelt. I understand your sentiment! By the way, I just love the title picture in your blog!

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  4. flaubert2 October 2010 at 23:46

    Oh~how I enoyed this poem!
    Pamela
    btw one of my best friends here in Mexico is named Dani.

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  5. gautami tripathy3 October 2010 at 13:59

    What a beautiful poem. I loved the rhyming!

    is it love poetry or missing muse or nothing?

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  6. Anonymous3 October 2010 at 20:30

    that header foto is wonderful... i can see one jump off the edge and soar... wish

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  7. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall4 October 2010 at 20:07

    love the rhymes...
    coo word flow.

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  8. Flying Monkey4 October 2010 at 20:56

    Thanks everyone. Glad you enjoyed it :-)

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