Sunday, 21 November 2010

Winter Blues (Inspired by Carry on Tuesday)

I look out of the window
Onto a gloomy day
Windy as my mind
All in disarray
The leaves have fallen
It’s raining cats and dogs
Short days are calling
They’ve turned back the clocks
And I feel so blue
Because I don’t want it to be true
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10 comments:

  1. Whitesnake22 November 2010 at 00:24

    Just remember that spring is just around the corner :-)

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  2. George S Batty23 November 2010 at 01:33

    alas poor Dani, tiz true but light a fire, drink some wine and spend the winter snuggling with the man you love. I doubt that you'll care what's going on outside.

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  3. Anonymous23 November 2010 at 05:34

    Ah, but winter also means Christmas and the first snowfall, and a new year!
    In the meantime, keep thinking thoughts of spring! : )

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  4. Nanka23 November 2010 at 11:13

    Enjoyable take on the prompt :) Very charming and witty too!!A very good description of a windy day :)

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  5. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall23 November 2010 at 15:16

    I feel the blue in you,
    your words ring cool...
    lovely entry.

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  6. Julie Jordan Scott23 November 2010 at 15:56

    Love what is - I know I love the words that sprang up from you! Brava!

    My shortest Carry on Tuesday poem ever...

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  7. Flying Monkey23 November 2010 at 16:24

    Thanks everyone. I do like snuggling up and enjoying the cosyness of this season and also look forward to Christmas with my family but I'm a summer girl who loves warm sunshine. (I was born in June 76, one of the hottest summers ever, so no surprise ;-)

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  8. budh.aaah23 November 2010 at 18:34

    Oh I love the first four lines absolutely. Very well used - the gloomy and windy day

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  9. Anonymous24 November 2010 at 06:11

    The turbulence in the mind - I feel it. :)
    Cheers!

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  10. Anonymous27 November 2010 at 10:18

    please join our poetry potluck this Monday, have fun!


    awards/treats 4 u

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