Sunday, 5 December 2010

Rollercoaster love (inspired by Carry on Tuesdays)

Through a rollercoaster
Of joy and despair
From seemingly grounded
To up in the air
Our relationship always
Continues to move
And therefore it really
Never loses its groove
I hope it will never
Get boring or lame
But always be exciting
And never the same
For change is the secret
And we’re the living proof
That the course of true love
Never runs smooth

12 comments:

  1. You really captured the spirit of the quote.

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  2. Your poem was a joy to read and you have captured it so accurately!! Loved it immensely :)

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  3. awesome,
    you amaze me..
    keep it up.

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  4. Glad to Land at your magical poetry land today,
    How are you?

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  5. Love certainly is a roller coaster but what a ride. Excellent poem. Hope you enjoy your week.

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  6. Thanks everyone for your comments and for stopping by :-)

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  7. well done. the ups and downs (no pun intended) of marriage is a proven fact. I liked the way you tied it to roller coaster

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  8. Isn't that the truth. Love is indeed a rollercoaster, it's the high at the highest point and low at after the fall. great read.

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  9. I couldn't agree more!Thanks for supporting Carry On Tuesday.

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  10. Roller coaster indeed. Nice Write. Love and Light, Sender

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  11. Very nice, there is so much hope in this piece and no fears :-)
    Enjoy your journey!
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  12. I like your roller coaster of a write, about a roller coaster of a relationship. Thanks

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