Through a rollercoaster
Of joy and despair
From seemingly grounded
To up in the air
Our relationship always
Continues to move
And therefore it really
Never loses its groove
I hope it will never
Get boring or lame
But always be exciting
And never the same
For change is the secret
And we’re the living proof
That the course of true love
Never runs smooth
You really captured the spirit of the quote.
ReplyDeleteYour poem was a joy to read and you have captured it so accurately!! Loved it immensely :)
ReplyDeleteawesome,
ReplyDeleteyou amaze me..
keep it up.
Glad to Land at your magical poetry land today,
ReplyDeleteHow are you?
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Love certainly is a roller coaster but what a ride. Excellent poem. Hope you enjoy your week.
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone for your comments and for stopping by :-)
ReplyDeletewell done. the ups and downs (no pun intended) of marriage is a proven fact. I liked the way you tied it to roller coaster
ReplyDeleteI couldn't agree more!Thanks for supporting Carry On Tuesday.
ReplyDeleteRoller coaster indeed. Nice Write. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteVery nice, there is so much hope in this piece and no fears :-)
ReplyDeleteEnjoy your journey!
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I like your roller coaster of a write, about a roller coaster of a relationship. Thanks
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