Monday, 6 September 2010

Wait (inspired by Sunday Scribblings)

Wait
Just a minute
Don’t leave just yet
Stay
Just a minute
So I won’t forget


How it feels when you hold me
And the smell of your skin
For the times when I’m lonely
And empty within

And when you return
It will be just so

As if you left
Only a moment ago
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11 comments:

  1. Lilibeth6 September 2010 at 03:02

    I feel her reaching out...almost see the little hand there. Nicely done. Oh, I hadn't seen your new bridge over the water. It's impressive.

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  2. Deborah6 September 2010 at 09:22

    A lovely poem and I love the picture ... I wish I was there! :o)

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  3. Anonymous6 September 2010 at 17:06

    Really, really lovely and simple straight forward message.

    Elizabeth

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  4. Flying Monkey6 September 2010 at 17:07

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  5. Flying Monkey6 September 2010 at 17:08

    Thanks.
    I chose this picture because that's where I'd love to be as well :-)

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  6. George S Batty6 September 2010 at 17:42

    I really liked this...that last touch...let me feel it forever...awesome

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  7. Anonymous7 September 2010 at 13:56

    Great poem, we've all been there! Too bad we haven't all been in these blue waters, beau - ti - ful! : )

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  8. Someone is Special7 September 2010 at 13:59

    I loved this wait.. last touch... Great...

    Do stop by Someone Is Special to enjoy the wait..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  9. Flying Monkey7 September 2010 at 21:23

    Thank you for the encouraging comments. They are much appreciated :-)

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  10. Anonymous7 September 2010 at 23:30

    there is a sweet yet sad tone to these lines ! i liked it still :)

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  11. Dee Martin8 September 2010 at 02:36

    What a beautiful and romantic poem!

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