Monday 6 September 2010

Wait (inspired by Sunday Scribblings)

Wait
Just a minute
Don’t leave just yet
Stay
Just a minute
So I won’t forget


How it feels when you hold me
And the smell of your skin
For the times when I’m lonely
And empty within

And when you return
It will be just so

As if you left
Only a moment ago

11 comments:

  1. I feel her reaching out...almost see the little hand there. Nicely done. Oh, I hadn't seen your new bridge over the water. It's impressive.

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  2. A lovely poem and I love the picture ... I wish I was there! :o)

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  3. Really, really lovely and simple straight forward message.

    Elizabeth

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  5. Thanks.
    I chose this picture because that's where I'd love to be as well :-)

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  6. I really liked this...that last touch...let me feel it forever...awesome

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  7. Great poem, we've all been there! Too bad we haven't all been in these blue waters, beau - ti - ful! : )

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  8. I loved this wait.. last touch... Great...

    Do stop by Someone Is Special to enjoy the wait..

    --Someone Is Special--

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  9. Thank you for the encouraging comments. They are much appreciated :-)

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  10. there is a sweet yet sad tone to these lines ! i liked it still :)

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  11. What a beautiful and romantic poem!

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